9 Comments:

  1. You have written this poem with such passion, although we may come from different backgrounds, i praise you are you have touched my heart with your sad poem. i hope you know there are many out there in similar situations. Though i may not be one of those i know what rebellion is like towards our parents but rise against that, but then something bad happens and you lack in knowledge of what to do... i hope you keep writting these heart felt poems as you have great talent even if it's about such tradgic things... your sincerly kirra

    Comment by Kirra — November 18, 2008 @ 9:13 pm

  2. Assalamu alaykum,

    can we use some of your poems for our site? It's a non profit site.

    thank you

    Comment by Muhammod Abdullah — December 15, 2008 @ 5:46 pm

  3. this poem is so sweet xxx

    Comment by sofia kosar — June 4, 2009 @ 6:56 am

  4. this has really touched my hart and is sweet ma frendsz fink sooo 2 . . . !

    Comment by shabnum khan — June 4, 2009 @ 6:58 am

  5. this poem is really really sweet and izzz truuuuu . . . ! Xxx

    Comment by sofia kosar — June 4, 2009 @ 7:00 am

  6. this izzz sweet, i like it XXX

    Comment by maariyah arshad — June 4, 2009 @ 7:01 am

  7. this is really gud Xxx

    Comment by sofia . . . ! Xxx — June 4, 2009 @ 7:02 am

  8. very nice poem

    Comment by Fathima Nazliya — July 21, 2009 @ 8:51 pm

  9. i lyke dis poem its so sweet and did the authour's mum die???????? its so sweet awwwwwwww

    Comment by salma — January 11, 2010 @ 6:16 pm

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